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Hej. Kille på 16 år som har skrivit en... Ska man säga countrylåt? Man kör ett A-accord genom hela låten med.. "countryplock"! Skulle bli glad om ni kommenterade! 🙂 kan gärna adda min msn för kommentarer också: infernalhuman@hotmail.com

I was walking down, a pieceful road
Didn't want to go home
Just wanted abroad
The sun burned in my neck
But I kept walking anyway
Just wanted to reach my goal
Eventhough I was alive
I kept thinking about your eyes
That kept me going down the road
With no one in sight
I started to think I was alone
But I streched my thighs
To continue my walking from home

REFRÄNG
There's nothing to see
Just leave my past behind
Nothing left to be
It's hard to be unique
If I cry for help
There will be no one listening
I'm on my own
REFRÄNG

Eventhough I didn't know
Where I was heading to
It was too late to turn back
It would just be cruel
Didn't meet no one
On the way
But I guessed
This road was ment for me
But some company
Wouldnt hurt
Anyway
Feels like I'm Stuck
In a chain
At the same time
I get blown away in a hurricane

REFRÄNG
There's nothing to see
Just leave my past behind
Nothing left to be
It's hard to be unique
If I cry for help
There will be no one listening
I'm on my own
REFRÄNG

I held her heart
Just a second before
Couldn't feel any pulse
Just gave up hope
It all went black
Thought I never go back
To this place
Still it's where I belong
But I define myself
As an independent man
I don't get trapped anywhere
Walking around the traps
Still it's dangerous
For me to walk outside
Obviously
Just lock and load
I've got nothing to lose
Go the whole way down
With methods never used before
No violence
No dot in my registry
But some serious pain
May remain afterwards
Doesn't sound that good
I really know the consequences
Of hurting a soul
Totally unmotivated

REFRÄNG
There's nothing to see
Just leave my past behind
Nothing left to be
It's hard to be unique
If I cry for help
There will be no one listening
I'm on my own
REFRÄNG

Crack a bottle of wine
Drink it all for yourself
But still feel no joy
Since you're all on your own
The food don't taste good
When it touches your lips
I want somebody
To feel how I feel*
This pieceful smile
May look to you
As an insurence
That I am as happy as you
But the real thruth is
I'm just a baby inside
I want more and more
You lean forward and kiss
But you never lean back, I insist
Never let go of me
Starting to feel a bit creepy*
You're not a pain in the ass
But it tears me up inside
Reason is unknown
But I know that something's wrong
High volume music
And dressed up girls
Never came to be amusing
Since there's no time for that now

REFRÄNG
There's nothing to see
Just leave my past behind
Nothing left to be
It's hard to be unique
If I cry for help
There will be no one listening
I'm on my own
REFRÄNG

*outro*
Here we are again
Catching up the good times
We had last year
If you can call it good times*
Can barely sleep
Watching my clock on the wall
Doesn't seem to move at all
But it's fine by me*


   
Citera

Nej, tonårsgnäll.


   
SvaraCitera

Att skriva det på UM kan nog ha varit ett jävligt stort misstag. Men jag skonar dig idag i alla fall [smile]


   
SvaraCitera

Dålig. Fanns ingen finess i den, sen är jag inte mycket för sk. "narratives".

Typ såhär är din text i mina ögon:

Först hände en sak
Sen hände det här
Då kände jag så här
Då blev det såhär
Nu är det såhär
Sen hände en annan sak
Då blev det så här
etc
etc.


   
SvaraCitera

HAHAHa söt due
lite för lång text dock


   
SvaraCitera

[y]


   
SvaraCitera

Gustavp94:

I was walking down, a pieceful road
Didn't want to go home
Just wanted abroad
The sun burned in my neck
But I kept walking anyway
Just wanted to reach my goal
Eventhough I was alive
I kept thinking about your eyes
That kept me going down the road

so on...

för mycket ord, keep.it.simpel.stupid(fucky)


   
SvaraCitera

P12 [tard]


   
SvaraCitera