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One girl sittning in her room and cry.
She was sad
She think everybody hate her.
She have very hurt on the school.
She don’t have anybody friends.
She have parents so hate her.
They hit her everyday.
One day she took her life.
But she don’t know whas a guy so love her.
He find her on the street.
And he say to her
I love you.
I come always love you
You are my wonderful angel.


   
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pris för flashigaste dikten


   
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byt so mot that?

lite gramatiska fel, som jag stör mig på, men fin mening med dikten 🙂


   
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[bigsmile]


   
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sorgiligt


   
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[confused][confused][confused]

Troll?


   
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Jellybeans:

Troll?


   
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Jellybeans:

Troll?

Chickfactor:

Troll?

Nej.


   
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ok dikt, men lär dig engelska bättre![wink]


   
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Tråden låst på grund av inaktivitet


   
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